Tuesday, May 21, 2019

Week 1-3 Dragon Slayer comments


1. https://desire1twentynineteen.blogspot.com/2019/02/week-1-3.html
hey there,
I really liked how you used your own theories and understanding of what you mean. For me, i would have used the Hobbit because it shows good understand i could compare it with Beowulf and use the myth genre and what i think about. It just a understand of what i will be doing. Keep it up ! :)


2.
 https://desire1twentynineteen.blogspot.com/2019/02/week-1-3.html

Hello there Ana,
I really liked how you used your own opinion about the genres and ideas but maybe if you added more quotes/evidence then your descriptions should have been great. Whereas you have just stated that everyone else. im not saying your one is bad, its excellent because there is no right or wrong answer to this but maybe show the readers how you understood what you meant and how you did. Keep it going! :)

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