Hello there Ana, I really liked how you used your own opinion about the genres and ideas but maybe if you added more quotes/evidence then your descriptions should have been great. Whereas you have just stated that everyone else. im not saying your one is bad, its excellent because there is no right or wrong answer to this but maybe show the readers how you understood what you meant and how you did. Keep it going! :)
I really liked how you used your own opinion about the genres and ideas but maybe if you added more quotes/evidence then your descriptions should have been great. Whereas you have just stated that everyone else. im not saying your one is bad, its excellent because there is no right or wrong answer to this but maybe show the readers how you understood what you meant and how you did. Keep it going! :)